Demonstration of technical and visual skills – materials, techniques, observational skills, visual awareness, design and compositional skills.
I feel as this is the first assessment and I am only just beginning to follow the course it is a hard task to form an Assessment, but I feel I have held my own on most points. I used the techniques and materials taught throughout Part 1, having used Pastel, Graphite and Charcoal in Assignment 1. Hatching was used very finely throughout the assignment, blending when necessary. I didn’t use the dot technique but feel I managed the light and tone well. My observation and awareness went well as shown with the contours, design and composition of the picture. I didn’t like using the mixed media and felt I struggled a little in their mixed application. I also found centring my work difficult, but used a series of lines to guide me which helped a great deal.
Quality of outcome – content, application of knowledge, presentation of work in a coherent manner, discernment, conceptualisation of thoughts, communication of ideas.
I think the outcome of the assignment was pleasing as the picture portrayed a feel of delicate indulgence and enjoyment. I felt I applied my knowledge gained as the shading showed varying degrees of tone and the presentation was much better than with the earlier less practiced pieces in Part 1 of my course.
Demonstration of creativity – imagination, experimentation, invention, development of a personal voice.
My work lacked a freshness of idea, at this stage I wasn’t really bringing anything new to the table, and my experimentation could have been better. I could of tried thumbnail sketches in the various medias instead of putting most of my energy into getting the composition correct. I have not yet developed my personal voice but feel I am on the brink of doing so. I know how I want something to look, but my application is still not there, nor my skill level. The style of my assignment couldn’t be picked out from the crowd, though I do feel my tone and mark works well.
Context reflection – research, critical thinking (learning logs and, at second and third level, critical reviews and essays.
I enjoy writing my learning log and love the research, but have difficulty in knowing where to start, once I get going I then have the same problem stopping. However I seem to have managed to write clear views and ideas and have enjoyed the process. My dyslexia does cause problems in this direction, as I have to write and re-write until I am happy with my written work. However I do think overall my critical thinking has shown in my log to be readable and shows I am interested and learning something.
Julie you have made a good start for this course especially considering the unknown levels required which you mention and imply in your personal profile.
There is a slightly varied level of work and I shall give examples of these below.
The assignment piece is especially good and you have also photographed this effectively on your blog. All of these factors make for a very encouraging first submission and it is evident that your are taking the course seriously.
Assessment potential after Assignment 1
Student name Julie Wrigley Student number 513762
Course/Module Drawing One Assignment number One
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Feedback on assignment
Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Quality of Outcome, Demonstration of Creativity
Part One – Feeling, memory and imagination
Project 2 Basic shapes and fundamental form
It is good that you have included your notes on the drawings to indicate what you were thinking showing that these are more working-drawings, where you are learning. However in the Clog drawing this slightly interrupts the efforts as I would have enjoys seeing it without so many arrows.
Exercise Group objects
I think you would agree this is much less successful than many other drawing in this selection however yes it is good to try this experimentation which I would encourage to re-visit as we go along. Perhaps a shift in media would help this.
Exercise Observing shadow using blocks of tone
Worked up into the bottom left – showing a strong sense of form, tone and a similarity to life.
Exercise Creating shadow using lines and marks
Quite a basic piece – not your strongest but good to test out.
Exercise Shadows and reflected light
Good to see you scale up with a fantastic grasp of form, shade and enjoyable reflection.
EXTRA – portrait – this actually feels less confident than for example the previous work ‘reflection’ using the same media. The lines are less contained and the overall quality to detail is lower. You have a people based project to work upon this later in the Unit which you can look forward to.
Assignment One A personal still life
3 small sketches in the small sketch section. In their placement these become quite disjointed. It would be much better to have a whole sheet of work in terms of decisions surrounding composition, colour, content, material/media tests etc. I have included 2 images of a previous OCA drawing student further along the course as a rough idea for you to see how a whole sheet could work – please note this is simply an example for you to find your own way to proceed.
In your blog text – there was a excellent level of critical analysis of this particular work from the beginning of the idea to the final outcome. This is exactly the kind of rigor that you should continue with for all of the sections of the incoming ‘parts’.
The piece itself is soft and has a warm atmosphere to the image of seemingly straightforward still life. However after reading your explanation each of the objects are personal and important to your. You could work on increasing the ‘personal’ within the work in terms of subject/object(s)/images you decide to work on. I think the research from the ‘essential reading list’ will help to inform you and your growing ideas.
The crockery in this piece also remind me of the work of Giorgio Morandi – perhaps if you are already familiar with his work, you could look again at some of his use of light and colour working with forms, shapes and compositions.
Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Demonstration of Creativity
A format point only. I would recommend that you use an actual sketchbook going
forward as singular pages in plastic sheet slightly veil the quality of the work
beneath. It is also fantastic to open a lively sketchbook when you come to the end
of a course full of the journey and exploration of the modes and methods of
working as well as the changing subject matter. Select one or two sizes which suit
you. You can always add flaps/extra sheets of paper in whilst you go.
Learning Logs or Blogs/Critical essays
This is a very good start – and a useful way to help with your dyslexia straight away. I
wonder if you have accessed the additional support given by OCA for Dyslexic students as
of yet? Lia Harness is the Learning Support advisor who is happy to help –
I like the way that you have put an entire section of the blog for research and
reflection. Make sure that you are ‘reflecting’ on what you are learning; both in
terms of the practical wand the theory work as well as what you have made or are
As I am aware of your interest in Botanical Drawing and gardening – I wondered if you were aware of the work of Michael Landy? And his ‘weeds’ series.
Have you managed to get any of the essential reading list so far – a great one to start with is the Vitamin D2 book – which has a huge number of artists with a variety of styles which you can pick and choose from as I am sure there will be some in there which will interest you.
MY REFLECTION ON FEEDBACK.
I was pleased with the overall feedback and took onboard suggestions made and couldnt really disagree with comments made except for one issue in my use of paper quality. I am always careful about the paper I use. However I have now started using a good quality Sketchbook and am glad I was told to do so and see the benefits of being able to look back and see my work progress.
I have read some of the recommended titles and other books that are not on the list. Which will be added to the books read on my blog.